Here's the front view.
The darned shoulder straps still keep slipping down, even after narrowing them. I'll be providing her a package of Res-Q Tape to help keep things in place; the deep neckline just doesn't help anchor the shoulders. The wrinkling in the front is due to the excess underbust width being pinned out in the back.
The back view:
I was thinking of adding a lining to the skirt, but the godets are so sheer it might be distracting. However, I might just tack one in for the final fitting and she can decide whether she wants to keep it or not.
So, there's some unpicking to do, then the bulk of the work is hand-sewing the trim. She is wearing flats with the dress (she can't wear heels) so the length should be good.